great poem! this is kinda weird my cuz she also is on this site just made a poem too, and it follows the same kind of song, it's about a different subject, just kinda weird. excellent though!

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

Sad one but a great job. hugs, *Ann*

This was good but I honestly got kind of confused. But I still liked it. Good Job

Chelsea, my dear, how did you get confused? -- I've tooken over the mind of someone who can see all that is going to happen & I can see these lil children dying so I tell them to "hush" so mommy/daddy doesn't hear them and they ignore my pleads and in return die. Very simple. but thank you for the comment anyhow.

very good awesome i like it because it is looking at the same pic just in a dif way u know very good new look on it

Hmmmm, very disturbing, yet very creative! I liked it! Keep to it~Holly

great job heather! and she called the cops because she told tucker to get outta her house and so he said fine so she called them and then she brought me into it...and blah blah she's just so mean!! she don't know me..just makes me mad,b ut anyway, great job!! take care, love ya~
*Brittany*

omg...wow...definitely dark...kinda disturbing, but still great...5/5.
Take Care.
Always, Danielle.

omgosh!!!!!!!!!!im not sure what to say. other then you nailed this on the dot. it was freakin awsome poem. sad. but so powerful. great just freakin great. i luv it. i hope that you are aite. Much luv

Nick

Great job Heather. I had to read it more than once to understand it tho, I'm just kinda slow today is all. So, great job.

ouch, that's sad 5/5

That was way out of the blue. Imaginative, creative and lovely. Way to go Heather

Very Dark and twisted imagery I rather liked, though It would be a good theme song in a horror movie. Great one. 5/5
Dave…..

WOOW!!! That was seriously freakin wicked!!! I loved it so much 5/5 all the way!! Keep it up hun xxx

Nicely Done.
I Liked The Way It Was Turned Into The Opposite Of The Real Lullaby.
Keep It Up.

Failed

woah, ok now i'm totally freaked out *shivers* brillaint idea but like i said i'm totally freaked
5/5
loving your poems