BEAUTIFUL. Highly creative.
"Stumbling through some sickly sweet
garden where such venom creeps
wept from violets in your grasp
of nightmarish beauty held so fast"
LOVED that stanza, it just had a flowing (yet at the same time shaky) style to it.
A truly brilliant write, a lovely love poem :-) a rare these days.
You are blessed with such immense talent! I'm hoping to see you post more work soon.