*Why?*

by *Guerita*   Apr 20, 2005


I feel I was only one more of your deeds
that you used for those personal needs.

I may have been a stupid fool
but all you did was try and play it cool.

How could your words hurt more then a knife?
How did they make me loose the passion for life?

Tell me why you tore all this apart?
You’re a stupid man who broke my heart.

You never cared about what I had to say
and no matter how much you hurt me I always tried to find away

Even if you don’t care I am going to tell you what I feel
because boy you may have not noticed but his lady is oh so real

Maybe this wasn’t love but just a complicated lust
but no matter what, you where always my must

The words I said to you where only a bit
because I know that you deserve it.

I know I deserve so much more
because a guy that loved me wouldn’t have left my heart all sore

You have caused me so much pain
that will always and forever remain.

You played with my heart
and for no reason tore it apart

I know you will always remember me
Even though things weren’t meant to be

You could have tried to treat me right
you could have tried to end all of our fights.

How come being by your side
now has me feeling like I am about to die

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  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    I think also, that you tried to put so much feeling so fast into this poem, I got the meaning and the flaws are just part of writing your emotions, we don't always flow, or rhythm, we just love and hold on for the bumpy ride of life. Keep writing your emotions, I think you have a lot of talent. Read mine when you have time, and tell me what you think......Good job Love ya Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow this was fantastic. A lot of emotion and pain; I can feel it. Great job. Thanks for the comment on mine, it meant a lot.

    Love much,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Very expressive...

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    this was a great poem, but i think you should have named it differently. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    pretty good poem, keep it up. and thanks for the comment