by *Guerita* Apr 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I feel I was only one more of your deeds |
by Becky drake
I think also, that you tried to put so much feeling so fast into this poem, I got the meaning and the flaws are just part of writing your emotions, we don't always flow, or rhythm, we just love and hold on for the bumpy ride of life. Keep writing your emotions, I think you have a lot of talent. Read mine when you have time, and tell me what you think......Good job Love ya Becky |
Wow this was fantastic. A lot of emotion and pain; I can feel it. Great job. Thanks for the comment on mine, it meant a lot. |
by No Motiv?
Very expressive... |
by Carmen
this was a great poem, but i think you should have named it differently. 5/5 |
by AJ
pretty good poem, keep it up. and thanks for the comment |