breath taking...
You're quite talented.

WOW! oh my.. how did that concept come into you head.. quite disturbing but absolutley brilliant! great talent! keep writing! 5/5

You've all been asking so I must say lol... i watched this show where this guy said " your eyes are gunna roll to the baq of ur head!" and i was like... Kool! is he like a phyco path? So then i got the idea to write a poem about a phyco path lol