Wow....this is brilliant! I was on the edge of my seat as I read it! Great flow and your descriptions were superb! Keep it up~Holly

great poem its so good!!
it flows so well. keep up the good work!!
~kasey~

Excellent write, very well done...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

Wow, this poem was INSANE!! I totally loved it. Gave you a five. Great work. >3jess

WOW. Mega amazing!!!! That's so cool! Ok I'll snap out of it. That poem is great. I love the way you wrote that, it was just...wow. hee hee. Yeah, basically, 5/5. Take care, Elle x

You should call up Robert frost too be u a true poet (excellent continue) (but i think of u as a poet a good one ) (but i dont know you)

Astonishingly perfect, without a flaw. So morbid, it sends freakin chills up my spine. Love it, totally love it! 5/5
Luv always, KT

That is very very good. Very dark and vivid. You are truly talented. I gave you a 5.

Oh my god I love it...Really awsome poem.
Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~(~~

wow that was perfectly dark, like subway to sally said (in german) show me your dark side thats the one i love

GOD! I just love your poem, your are truley an amazing poet! Has any of your poem ever been published??

No, im more of a closet poet, i just write... the only people who read them are you guys

Wow, I love your writing style, and love this topic, me two has my inner demons. Well love your poetry, Im gonna read them all. 5/5.