I loved this dark life poem... it certainly highlighted the bad factors in life, even though the good had been left out.
"Words are sticks and stones" I LOVE that metaphor, it's basically a poem in its own right, the whole "sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never harm me." you've changed it around definetely to make words hurt more than actions, which they can.
This had a very omnipotent feel to it; you've captured angst well.
:-) great work!

i love that because it is very true..........very good