I slowly look inside my heart
Nothing with him has been finished
or has even began to start
My head says to surge forward while my heart can't go
The tears begin to tread as I try to tell myself no
I look back and remember myself before
Before this man took my heart and silently tore
I was giddy, laughing still
But this was before I knew love could kill
I love him so much but it's hard to tell
why I can't move on and stop feeling like hell?
No one should love so much it hurts inside
Whoever said love was a great thing lied!
eh ;/ kinda cheesy, but dont be harsh. first one in awhile, kinda rusty. ilu sarge.
I didn't think your poem was cheezy. you can feel all the emotion you put into. great work. if you ever have time... tell me what you think of my stuff...