What a sweet poem, that was so lovely. Keep it up.

that was nice matthew. keep writing=) -hOlly

aww i realy enjoyed readin that poem u av talent keep up the gud work matthew!!

this one is touching. it makes me remember my first kiss lol on the playground when i was 8. but it was nothing compared to this lol. read and vote and comment on my poems please. thanks oh by the way thanks for checking out my poem. your on my favorites list you dont have to add me on their becuz most of my poems are depressing but if you want to thats fine

grt peom loved it :)
always smile
peaceeee

I don't know what more to say! Your poems are amazing! That was beautiful! I look forward to reading more of your work soon! Brooke

that was really good hun
keep writin
*plz comment on mine

cute cute .. i loved it !! xOo kt

I like it alot... Good poem!!

another sweet one lol....man wut i'd do for u to be here.......*sighs*....
~*~yasmin~*~

Awwwww, to feel like this again! This poem really takes me back, thank you for sharing it! I loved this couplet:

"My lips meet yours in a passionate kiss;
Its champagne, fireworks, and heavenly bliss"

Mesmerizing piece~Holly

i read all of ur poems , i dont know how many times 2 say it but ur a great writer. i like em, let me know when u add new 1's.

whoever this girl is your talking about in your love poems should know that she is a very very lucky girl to have someone so passionate to love. good luck with your writing. you're doing awesome for someone who doesn't write that often.

Very very good

Wow matthew all your poems are very nice i loved every single one of them!!!your a great poet!!=)

You have awesome talent...keep up the great work!!!

MemberOfTheBlackParade x

Your poem is really descrpitive and the emotions captured are really good. plz comment on my wrk. bye x

Omg this poem is beautiful and was so touching. i can't believe someone could write something this beautiful, amazing, and awesome and loveing. Thxs for insiering me. That poem opened my mind and heart and soul.

Wow, i loved it, it was awesome. i added you to my fave's, hope you dont mind, maybe if you have enough time you could vote and comment on some of my poems. but i gave you a 5 for the kiss. it was so deep. great writing.

This is really beautiful, well written. 5/5, Em