This is such a deep poem. I hope thigs are better for you now!

I love what you are writing about my friend....it's a powerful to be so effected by the opinions of others...especially someone you love.

One thing i would say though...is that this piece is very blunt...obviously an emotional stream, written very quickly...but you could try and say things by inferring them with some subtlety....and maybe lose some words that make the poem sound more like a paragraph of a story.

Good luck...and break all your mirrors.

thanks. Kevin if you get time send me a message and give me some suggestions. I really admire your work. Thanks again you two