k well u kno wat im about 2 say rite? b/c i've said it on alla ur other poems too..ne wayz....wonderful poem paul!! hehehehe

*jenny*

pretty good. i like the title, it goes good with the poem. not many people comment on titles, but not a lot of people realize how hard it is to think up a title sometimes. neway keep up the good work.
~Freak~