well idk wat 2 say cept...another awesome poem!! damn im jealous of how good u r at writing! so keep on writing!

*jenny*

hmm you could call it Distant Time, because you mentioned the distant past and distant future. but the poem isnt exactly about that, could title it simply, Pain. But anyway, i liked it, it's not your best though. Keep up the good work. i enjoy reading your work
~Freak~