by ---AL--- Apr 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The Season of Ice |
by ---AL---
I really Appreciate this comment. I agree it is VERY long. I believe it is one of my longest poems. yet which originally made my ending rushed... that is what I had edited. I thank you for your comment. |
by Stephanie
Aww...really sad yet very amazing! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem, it meant a lot! |
by Angie
Wow! this was such a great poem...sad yet meaningful. I also liked the style in which u wrote ur poem. And it had a great flow. I read it twice! lolz! Great write! Keep up the awesome work! Take care! byez! 5/5 |
by Mandy Lou
I think this is awesome! This reminded me a lot of Edgar Allen Poe! I don't really like Poe, but this poem was GREAT!! It was one poem that you must take slowly and read each word purposfully! Great write! |
by Samantha
Your last few lines didn't seem to fit. Maybe it was the meter, that's what I'm guessing. |