Good poem, reminds me of poe,the way you used the winter season. I like your imagery. Your points are clear and percise. It is a unique peice of work. nicely done.
~Breeze

It's so sad but really beautifully written.
I loved this poem. you're really talented. the title is very good too.
wish you happiness,
marjan

Your last few lines didn't seem to fit. Maybe it was the meter, that's what I'm guessing.

The rest of the poem was very cleverly written and I have a great respect for your talent. I had to slow down and really read it to keep up with all the threads of thought, it was extremely well thought out.

I think this is awesome! This reminded me a lot of Edgar Allen Poe! I don't really like Poe, but this poem was GREAT!! It was one poem that you must take slowly and read each word purposfully! Great write!

Wow! this was such a great poem...sad yet meaningful. I also liked the style in which u wrote ur poem. And it had a great flow. I read it twice! lolz! Great write! Keep up the awesome work! Take care! byez! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

Aww...really sad yet very amazing! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem, it meant a lot!

-Stephanie-

I really Appreciate this comment. I agree it is VERY long. I believe it is one of my longest poems. yet which originally made my ending rushed... that is what I had edited. I thank you for your comment.