Very horrifying but yet, I love it....because it creeped me out a bit. I do so much studies in murders/cannibilists and things of that matter, you really sound like you'd do these things. I hope it's just to write however lol. 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig

ps keep in touch!

Ewww not into gore n creepy stuff but nevertheless great poem! :)

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Loved it!I have read and studied a lot of different serial killers! You are an amazing writer. When I have more time I would love to stop back and read all your work! Take Care! Brooke

This is slightly darker than your usual style for me still a good piece and left me with almost a taste in my mouth ( a strange sensation) xx

i liked it..it was very good..:) i gave it a 5/5. keep it up

shannon

Holy! That gave me goosebumps! 5/5!

"Without a word I will stalk them to a dead end,
then under a lamppost I will let my fury descend.
The traffic noise will dull their screams of pain,
even with thrashing around, it will be in vane."

^^favourite part. I found those lines to be amazingly written, so detailed and vivid, with so much power and depth.

I loved the imagery you created in this, very strong and intense, and at some places even a little creepy.

The flow was good for the most part, and I thought this was original and beautifully written.

Fantastic unusual poem loving the names etc you incorporate into this poem xxx alex xx

Woah, that was pretty insane for someone i hope i not writing based on personal experiences lol i'm just kiddin' seriously though, very unique and chilling. i could lucidly envision the diabolical actions of a serial killer. this piece was very deep and eery. interesting and amazing write from a what a killers perspective would mostly likely be. brilliant work. 5/5

This piece also felt as if i were watching my favorite tv doc. show>Foresic Files! haha