Changing For Society

by Heather M Craig   Apr 21, 2005


Peering at the fragile image
and she seems so desolate,
particulary from the tears
that construct from society hate.

I encounter her presence and I feel nothing
but the flaming warmth from her soul.
Although from the depths of her heart,
obscurity has begun to take control.

The purified beauty flows within her
but no one takes it's notice,
so she destroys the unseen
with each razor blade kiss.

Everything she taught herself to be
has vanished from thee eye.
I long to be accepted with society
even if I shall live my life a lie.

Heather M Craig

--don't worry, my loves, I'm never changing despite their words. Just wanted to write it all out.--

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  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    don't change!!! ur perfect! ur beautiful just like your words

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I could relate to this poem Heather, its a great piece. I found it deep, but not overly open probably due to its length but at the same time and on the same note I think that in itself made this poem more effective :o) Well done darling stay smiling

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    I agree with Natalie, you're kinda freakin me out too. lol. But I also agree with Ashley, cuz you always make a good point. Good job. 5/5.
    Take Care.
    Always,
    Danielle.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey great poem! were talking about this in my english class right now about why people follow the crowd, great job!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It's sad and very good.

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