Terrific-I swear if you hadn't such language skills I would not have even bothered. I tire of the monotonous tyranny against this forum and slitting wrists.

This form of expression, poetry, is a splendid way to chase away such thoughts, as then to become ever lost in our shared imaginations.

This was a well written poem. Yeah a little gory, but well described in the stanzas. Helps explains the moment of the action. How the combination of physical and mental pain counteracts to cancle each other out. But no need to do that, I care for yah and always worry. There are better ways, love yah bye...

omg thats so stupid someone told me to "shut up" she's trying not to cut!" what? not like i was saying o it's ok to cut heather! i'm telling her i'm here for her and she can make it through! i don't know how u misunderstood me like that! she said she was venting and leting anger out, thats what i was saying was ok, better to write about it then do it itsn't it? thats what i was talking about! don't tell me to shut up again when we are both telling a friend the same thing about how she'll be ok and make it through and that we are here for her!

~sorry heather u had to read this, but i wasn't taking someone telling me to shut up when i was trying to cheer you up the same time she was. and don't listen to those who gave you low ratings on this poem!~

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~ and always stay strong!

amazing, don't hide the pain you don't have to pretend your okay, nothing gets solved, it's so not cool.

good poem it sounds so real 5/5 plz check out mine sometimes it would mean tons thanx~~ !~!*!KIRSTEN!*!~!

This poem was one that should be in books and reminds me of myself many times and is true to many. Grate Job!

This is really good. You can talk to me any time you want.

This is really good. You can talk to me any time you want. I understand how you feel.

very strong and beautiful poem. absolutely amazing!!!! keep up the great work!
Ariane
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my god, very intense... i love this poem, so true, so real. its amazing how you can seem to relate to anyone who read this. well, i can relate to you. it seems you have read my mind, and written down how i feel. your an incredable writer... keep it up

great poem...
nothing more really to say
but keep it up

Heather ! Jeez,that is Excellnt ! i loved it,

i loved this part :
After I've dried my eyes
and the blood has been washed away,
I wrap myself in long sleeves, smiling...
when I assure you "I'm okay

we all need to go one with a smile,but am afraid that sometimes we cant be OK !!

Lovely one.

take care
Rua Francis.

That poem is wonderful. And thank you for commenting on my poem "Far From Happy". All of your poems are wonderful. Stay strong.

-Ice

that was a good poem, i loved it. i write that way when i'm mad and upset too. plz check out some of my poems
harley