I really liked this poem. I can't believe you're not done because with it just like this it's amazing. Tell me if you add more I'd love to read it.

Great work

<3

Christina...

Wow!!! It's Amazing,
I Could Really See It,
Absolutley Wonderful.
Well Done,

Failed.

awwwww hun. I know how you feel, I feel the same way so many times its not funny. But keep your head up high and never fall, because life is to important to give up. Trust me, I've tried to end my life, and I almost did one time. And its not a good thing. Sometimes I still want to, but then I talk to someone I can trust or I go and write till all my pain I have is either hidden deep or gone. I never know which one the pain goes. But if you ever want to talk just email me. Keep up the writing and don't stop!!! If you want to comment and vote on any of my poems its fine with me, I don't really care if you do or don't. But I'm always here for ya, well I'm always here for anyone on here, because there's so many people that I can go to on here to help me out. And I just want to pass on the same that they show me.

Love ya
Kala Dearing

its quite good just how it is. 5/5 ~keep it up~

Hon I liked this, You do need to proof read. You are missing a few words you need.

EASILY UNDERSTOOD BY THOSE WHO WOUILD TAKE THE TIME

Very strong poem, it's beautifully written i don't see anything wrong with it.

Wow this is really amazing ans so full of your emotions!! I can totallyt relate to this poem, I knwo the feeling you are going through!!! It's very good and I can honestly say that I enjoyed reading it, I have to give it a 5 =0)

"I’ll cry so much,
My eyes will run dry.
Then you’d see all of me,
I won’t have to lie."

I love this, it's the best part of your poem, and i love it. great work. 5/5. thanks, by the way, for all the comments you leave me, you're always the first to post!

-brittany

Excellent write, very well done...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.