Failed to be Loved

by beautiful   Apr 21, 2005


Listen up boys & Girls
I tell you a tale
about a girl in her struggles
and how she tried but failed.

She tried to make him notice her
but didn't quite get it
all she wanted was an "I love you"
but he never quite admitted it.

She was hungry for those words
She was hungary for that thought
all she wanted was to be loved
but hits and blows was all she got.

He blame her for everything
he hit her for being in his way
this pain she had to live with
day after day.

She was told she was nothing
she was told she was dirt
he brought her pain and despair
a rain of hurt.

She carried this rain for years
24/7 365
she began to ponder
"why is it she's alive."

So 1 day she stepped onto the ledge
opened her arms ready to fly
until she was caught
caught by some guy.

He told her he loved her
he told her he was real
he showed her the feelings
she was yearning to feel.

He kept her by his side
he held her by her hand
he told her he'd never leave her
and would always be her man.

He gave her all the things she yearned for
gave her all the things she needed
he mend her heart
every time it bleeded.

He'd kiss her tears away
shield her heart from the rain
he make her stop everything
he scared away her pain.

They were each others one and only
the love of their lives"
but that stopped until the day
the day he said good-bye.

now again she ponders
"why she's still alive?"
Why does she have to live
with all this pain inside?"

So now as she steps onto the ledge
she opens her arms to fly
hoping someone would catch her
hoping it be that guy.....

Now boys and girls that's the story
about s girl who gave up her life
how she tried so hard
but couldn't get it right.

So learn from her pain
Learn from it please
Now here's the secret about the girl
that girl was me....

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  • 19 years ago

    by beautiful

    Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I have read 1 of yours also. I think its " you assumed all this"? Lemme just say wow! Talk about a great come back. I added you as on eof my favorites so keep those flows coming! Don't 4get to keep ur head up!

  • This is such a great poem, i cant even tell u how much this made me feel, i got chills up my spine! i totally loved the originality! i no exactly how u feel! i feel the same! u think this guy can make u happy then he leaves u like everyone else! i no how u feel! if u need someone i am always here but keep writing u r sooo great at it! 5/5!!

    luv Maddy xxx