Yet another beautiful concept encompassed beautifully in your words.
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nice. it was beautiful. this one was probably one of my favorites of yours. no lie. amor siempre nancy

Excellent poem! I can relate. Check out mine if find time.

I loved this poem.. the way is written is great..5/5...keep up the good work...check mine out if u get a chance...luv..vicky

This is in my opinion, structurally sound, but in every other way i can think of, cliche. I mean it looks like you wrote it to impress someone, most likely a girl, because i can't imagine someone thinking like that in realistic terms unless their minds were full of the thoughts of other people...people who would read their thoughts on paper and eithe be impressed or disapointed.

It's just no real enough.

3/5....if i had to vote..which i never do.

No offence.

i realli enjoyed this poem, yeah i know that poem was bad, i was bored when i wrote it. i have better ones you should check them out

that's really sad. Hope your O.K. Nice write. >3jess

All your poems seem to have depth and convey an important message. Well done.

xxx

This was amazing... very descriptive.. i loved it!

Obviously everyone has different opinions towards ones writing such as yours.

Mine just happens to be completely different from the previous comment made above by 'Kevin Murray'.

I thought this poem was absolutley amazing. It was very descriptive, and your wide vocabulary sent it to another demension.

To be completely honest, I think I might even envy you. You did a fantastic job, and I really enjoy your style.

welcome to my favorites list.
5/5.

Tight poem, I liked this one a lot. You use lots of excellent imagery and words that aren't typical (if you know what I mean). Nice write 5/5