Poetic Sea

by HOLLY ARMER   Apr 21, 2005


Staring down at this empty page
Frustration turns into silent rage

Fighting the anger, losing my mind
Swarming thoughts, making me blind

Muscles contract, feeling so tense
Writing these words, making no sense

Tear it out and throw it away
Thoughts eluding me, unable to stay

Trying hard but can't keep track
Sentences slip right through the crack

Falling to depths unknown to me
As I flounder within the poetic sea

*Any votes/comments appreciated*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    very clever, very real. I tend to have the urge to write a poem, and if it doesnt flow straight away, i leave it and do something else. None of my poems have taken me more than 15 mins from start to finish because of this. i think everyone feels the frustration you speak of sometimes though. well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Awesome write Holly! I really enjoyed...5/5 take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very well done...
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by robbie

    wow
    i really like that
    well i am rpoud to say that you are my first favorite author because im new here
    i liked the way it had no conection to anything but yet you managed to end it up in a poetic way.
    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I like your poem it...is different than most i have heard.

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