Comments : Poetic Sea

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Oh Holly, how cute!! I don't know what to say "poetic sea" ...oh I <3 that.

    Love
    Heather
    ps 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Holly, great work it expresses the frustration of writters block with such grace. Keep it up

    5/5
    Dave.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyra

    Not at all bad, and though I'm a big fan of free verse and not too into rhyming, this one has a regular flow to it. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really frustrating when that happens we can all relate! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I like your poem it...is different than most i have heard.

  • 19 years ago

    by robbie

    wow
    i really like that
    well i am rpoud to say that you are my first favorite author because im new here
    i liked the way it had no conection to anything but yet you managed to end it up in a poetic way.
    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very well done...
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Awesome write Holly! I really enjoyed...5/5 take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    very clever, very real. I tend to have the urge to write a poem, and if it doesnt flow straight away, i leave it and do something else. None of my poems have taken me more than 15 mins from start to finish because of this. i think everyone feels the frustration you speak of sometimes though. well done