Oh Holly, how cute!! I don't know what to say "poetic sea" ...oh I <3 that. |
Holly, great work it expresses the frustration of writters block with such grace. Keep it up |
by Lyra
Not at all bad, and though I'm a big fan of free verse and not too into rhyming, this one has a regular flow to it. Good work. |
by Taylor
great poem! i love it! really frustrating when that happens we can all relate! keep it up! |
by dragonfly
I like your poem it...is different than most i have heard. |
by robbie
wow |
by Amit
Excellent write, very well done... |
by Natalie84
Awesome write Holly! I really enjoyed...5/5 take care |
by Jay27
very clever, very real. I tend to have the urge to write a poem, and if it doesnt flow straight away, i leave it and do something else. None of my poems have taken me more than 15 mins from start to finish because of this. i think everyone feels the frustration you speak of sometimes though. well done |