Comments : The Rifle

  • 19 years ago

    by troubled

    wow this poem is awesome!! so powerful! sad tho...but i know how you feel. ne wayz...great poem! keep it up! 5/5!

    *jenny*

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    oooo i like it. i didnt expect the ending :P nice touch. keep up the good work.
    ~Freak~