Nice job

I like this-it's simply stated, easily understood and yet says so much-regret, pain, caring, -it works good as a love poem too.Though not a fan of rhyming work, this has a somewhat smooth flow and the sincerity and feeling make it work well.Good piece.
Oh, thanks for your comment on"The Ragged Man'(I wasn't going to post it as I've never quite been completely satisfied with it-but that's true of a lot of my stuff).Anyway thanks again.Keep writing and I'll keep reading!Take care,
Gary