that is very true your point as i understand it is that our spirituality is misdirected because of division corruption of external religious zelous we need to look inward for the Spirit of God outstanding poem 5+

this is awesome. i hate how religion is used to create hatred.

wow, thats really good. cant wait to read part 2 ~keep it up~ 5/5

-no more

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Wow, I think you're very talented, I love the originality of this piece...the first stanza especcially captivated me. Nice piece 5/5

Love
Heather

*claps hands*..Bravo bravo!! This poem was breath taking...seriously..I have never read a more powerful poem like that I've just read..I agree with you 100% on everything word you said..Keep that faith! Its amazing...Wodnerful Job 5/5
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Wow.. I have no words... It's great!
5/5

Really powerful poem, great to read, I liked the way you laid it out as well... keep on writing

this is amazing...i don't think iv'e ever read anything like it..great job deserves a 5 for sure!
xxxChristinaxxx

I like the other one better but this poem is still a 5! I think you will have to go on my favourites! LOL! :)

Shows depth of thought and a maturity and wisdom of soul - well done xx

I really enjoyed this and it was amazing, very captivating and different5*