Lingering (Haiku)

by Dorotea©   Apr 22, 2005




Thy soul lingers on
Behind the veil of nature
Keeping my hearts key

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    wow so much in 3 lines!!!!!!!!!!
    ps i LOVE finland!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    great haiku!!!! *mwah*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Very nice. The depth you bring through in your writing continues to astound me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Exquisite_Emily

    WOW! really good job, its interesting nd I love the "inner meaning" I havent read a poem like that forever! Gret job!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Libby M

    Interesting poem:) I liked it and thank you for the describing it for us:)

    Love,
    Libby

  • its vague yet so beautiful and meaningful i loved it very short and sweet with a hint of the unknown awsome work >>5/5<<
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