Interesting poem....the rhyming took a lot away, though.

wow, im amazed. thats really good ~keep it up~

Original for sure! I liked it, it burned a hole into my heart ;D hehe, anyway, yes very well written, I enjoyed that. It's good to see original poetry on this site too! Keep writing,
Satuxxa

That was brillliant, more depressing than your usual ones though ;) Very fiery.
Luv Scarlet xxxxxxxx