Taunted Life~

by **Stary_nights**   Apr 22, 2005


I'm so fed up with life,
With all that brings strife.
With everything coming near,
I'm surprised I'm still here.

Your mom makes it so hard,
This should be my last regard.
Sometimes I break down and cry,
I can't take it sometimes; I don't know why.

I feel like I'm trapped inside,
And there's no where to run and hide.
There are no windows to escape,
I cannot see the doors shape.

I wish people could see,
Instead of just disagree.
That I'm somebody too,
And I deserve a chance from you.

I'll wear a frown,
While I fall down.
I'm falling under,
Why I wonder.

I wonder why she hates me,
Cuz I've been trying to be,
The person that she wants,
And not the one she taunts.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Its a sad but well-written poem. Are you saying your mom taunts you? She should be the one to encourage you. Anyway its a great poem. Good job. It's a 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Oh yes! I noticed it, it says 7 comments on your main page, but here are only 6 (before my comment). I too don't know what happened to bert! I asked Ann (**Star~Eyes**). She knew nothing about him either!

    p/s

    One of my online friend (poetess) from this site, Jenny told me if someone reports or complains about your poem, they suspend your account! It's horrible! We too can face the same problem tomorrow!

    Also, I don't know bert's email ID! :(

    Anyways, I've put up my email address on my home page, so that I can get in touch with everyone, including you :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Sorry I haven't kept in touch much...I know I voted on this poem one before & got kicked offline so I couldn't comment, but anyhow I will now! Great job babe! keep up the amazing work!

    Love Always,
    Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Superb brit, 10000 excellents... very well expressed..
    5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Liked The Way You Worded This Poem It Was Excellent What More Can I Say Than 5.0? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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