This was extremely good, it had emotion and I could really feel it. A friend of mine was shot my poem I Miss You is about him. So in truth I do understand what you're going through. If you want to talk just e-mail me @ tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com. And I hope that everything turns out for you, and in the end I know it will. :-/
*Jordan-Paige

Thanks. I really miss him, so I'm going through some rough times.

This poem had alot os emotion... and i liked how you brought it in to your poem.....
I am truly sorry for your loss........ i hope your pain will will fade away in the mean time remember the good times you had and not the bad.....
im outy...
cya.....
xxx