I really like this poem. I love how the first stanza was full of questions. 5/5. Please, don't jump off a building, i know im a stranger and my words may mean nothing, but don't ok. I can relate to this poem really well thought. Excellent imagery and expression. Keep writing.
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

nice work, you have such potential... "Some say it was luck I say living a life is already hell"
-i love that line. great job, keep it up

I liked it a lot keep up the good work xox laura marie

Good work with this poem. I liked it. Keep it up.

Awesome love this poem

Wow, this is a very deep poem. But i think poetry is best written if it is heart felt. Good job its a beautiful pieace.

Awesome poem!