Keep It Together***

by NoPatience   Apr 23, 2005


I was trying to keep it together
but I'm falling apart
no one can see
the tears in my heart

I'm trying to keep it together
but the pieces wont fit
I'm trying so hard
not to let reality hit

but i guess its over now
and nothing is the same
my mind will wander
but my heart will never change

i will try to keep it together
but i know it wont work
because either way
my feeling are hurt

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    thanks. what word did i misspell??

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    sorry to point out another spellin mistake haha. i point them out because they disrupt the flow of any poem and its always good to just not have them. other than that its a really good one. 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    awww well thank you i will keep that in mind!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Aww thats such a sad poem! i feel the same way! Remeber that im here if you need sum1 to talk to! 5.0

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