oh wow, im in love with this line:
The funny thing is I don’t even
care.
It’s crazy how much pain you can cause with out messing up your
hair.

eeee its so good. and well true a lot of us chix can seemingly do that. we deal with broken hearts better then yu men do. love the poem.
~Freak~

I could feel your pain while reading this poem! So sad but that's love. Another great poem sad but full of emotions! Take Care! Brooke

Yep nicely done.It has a lot of emotions running through the poem.
I can relate to this one.
Keep it up!
All the best to you...
;-)

I have to give you props to that one very well done, wrote in a victem's persepective but still well done. I hope you get around to reading some of my work I think you will find it intresting to say the least until then have a good day and keep writing...

Very nice, sad as it was. If i were you i'd change the name, just because Beautiful Disaster is a song.. and it would be better if it was something original. But not that important really, great job!

Good job on this one, I liked the flow of the poem, the topic was cliche, but I suppose that if that's the way you feel than that's the way you feel.

This is a nice peom. A lot of pain I feel from you. I liked it, I liked the poem a lot. Keep it up, you're doing good.

This was so...wow...idk how to describe it. i love the way i can feel the emotions of this poem. it was simply amazing! 5/5