Just Missed

by bryan   Apr 23, 2005


In 17 years i have but one regret.
looking into your eyes the first time we met.
That one single Day wish i could forget.
Sometimes things happing that we don\'t expect.
If i had the chance id change it all.
Go back in time and stop myself from taking that fall.
Deep into love with just one glimpse.
I\'d make it all go away if i had one wish.
So i would never remember the love i missed.

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  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Amazing !!! awesome & breath taking... u know what ??? the poem "murder or suicide " by me is written for my friend who's name is also bryan...
    as i read ur poems i was hoping my friend was also as deep & sensitive as u are
    lovely poem
    i'm adding u to my favs
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    *sigh* this is another great poem! one that i can relate to also. I wish i could have written something like this..it was beautiful! ur an amazing writer! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Short but you were able to get your point across with just a few words. Not bad! Keep it up! Take Care! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was okay, the rhyme was a bit overbaring at times, but okay job overall.

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    Wow, i can actually say that i love this poem. i'm not sure why, i guess i can just relate.. and it seems to flow perfectly.

    If i had the chance id change it all.
    Go back in time and stop myself from taking that fall.

    i love those two lines! good work!

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