"better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all" obviously you dont agree with this theory..id have to agree with you on that one. nice poem. keep up the good work
~Freak~

Hmmmm...very nice.
Keep on writing..
5/5.

Short and to the point thats great but the spelling and flow was abit off good try anyway...

short but awsome
personally i think it needs some work
its great and all but you need to look it over, it flows but maybe a little too much...... i'm prob not makin any sense but anyway this is awsome!
>>5/5<<
bec

Wow, i can actually say that i love this poem. i'm not sure why, i guess i can just relate.. and it seems to flow perfectly.

If i had the chance id change it all.
Go back in time and stop myself from taking that fall.

i love those two lines! good work!

This was okay, the rhyme was a bit overbaring at times, but okay job overall.

Short but you were able to get your point across with just a few words. Not bad! Keep it up! Take Care! ~Brooke~

*sigh* this is another great poem! one that i can relate to also. I wish i could have written something like this..it was beautiful! ur an amazing writer! 5/5

Amazing !!! awesome & breath taking... u know what ??? the poem "murder or suicide " by me is written for my friend who's name is also bryan...
as i read ur poems i was hoping my friend was also as deep & sensitive as u are
lovely poem
i'm adding u to my favs
love
amy