comments please?

I can relate to this I have felt that way myself. Very well written! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

The feeling you're into is not new for me...I've been to a lot of pain...yet somehow I manage to hold on what's is left for me....myself.
Be strong..chin up...you have a long way to go my friend..
All the best to you.
Definitely a5/5.

I see alot of this in young writers alot of powerful words but no cause as to why they are used. you got the effect down real good but the cause as to how this came to be is nonexsistant. Please let me know why that is? Oh well maybe next time...

deep stuff very deep,
reminds me alot of some of my stuff so obviously im gona like it lol
no seriously this is excellent i think its great seeing your new and all
>>5/5<<
bec

Another great poem.. you really how to make your writing flow and i think that is one of the most important aspects of writing. Very strong.

THis was okay, you had some really original rhymes in there that were really great, but there were others that I have heard a thousand times before, and this poem was a bit cliche. Keep writing!

Good peom.. you might want to change 1 to one... it's a little distracting. I know how you feel, keep the writing, it's powerful.

I gave u 5/5 cuz u know wht?/? thts just how i feel & i know what its like to hear something funny & not laugh
its terrible the life we live ...
fake smiles & real tears...
u'd know why im like this if u read
"murder or suicide" ... take time to read it
take care
love
amy

Omg..wow! that was amazing. when i was reading this, my jaw dropped in awe. i relate to this poem...alot. expecially with this line
"I'm alone and no 1 knows.
The pain that seeps threw my skin.
Heartless but my smile shows.
Being happy is just a dream.
While I sleep I have nightmares."

it was great! i love ur poems! 5/5