Great poem....kinda schizo like. Anyway, "lead" should be "led" in "He’s lead me on this chase". I've always been a fan of your poems, this one is no different.

Wow...great poem! I loved the intensity and the twist at the end! Definitely 5/5~Holly

i luv it!!! grt suspense....
anagha

odd but good plz check out mine it would mean lots thanx !~!*!KIRSTEN!*!~!

Now can I ask what crime have you comitted?The answer is up to you.

great twist made me think a i give it a 5/5 great job!!!!
relistik

Wow awsome poem.. i love it
Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~)~~

Dude- i love this poem- totally. Its way good. :)

Well done with this one too!

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Awesome.

wow, that was awesome. i love how you go into detail like that. i wish one day i could be like you. your poems just fit together with every word. i think its really cool.

hay check out my poems if you get a chance. tell me what you think of mine.

Kikibird

hay dont type in kikibird type in

Darkness in the poem search bar

Now that waws rather thought provoking and uniquely shocking. nice poem.

Good job it had an interesting twist and made me want to keep reading it

5/5 wow thiz poem waz really deep and shocking....thiz iz the bezt poem i read 2day....u did really good and kept the flow.....i hope u keep writing cuz u are really good at what u do

much luv
peachez

Wow great poem just a little on the creepy side but i didnt wanna stop reading it

This poem is simply amazing. You have talent. I'm going to read more of your work. Keep writing 5/5

OMG...*still taking in breath... TOTALLY UNEXPECTED!!! I did not see that coming!!!

i have to say that you've inspired me... i won't copy you, but your poem has placed me on the right track for my own... GREAT WORK, i'll look for it in a book...
Chimaen

The end really shocked me since I wanted to know who the killer was then you said it was you and I was like wow!!
Great description and a very deep poem. Keep it up
xx Roxy