by KAP DAR
I think that because most people eat meat then that would make them a killer not to mention the fact that our very one government creates war and the people who fight them are indeed killers!! great poem! makes you think! 5/5 |
Beautiful! It's really great and to me has deep meaning. |
by Samantha
This poem was really good.I like it the way it is. |
WOw. Such a great poem with great heartfelt emotions. I'm speechless lol. 5/5 |
Wow.....nice poem man :) |
It flowed really well. 5/5 -T. Jane |
by Nakoal
OMG!!!!!!THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD!!IT SAYS SO MUCH!!GREAT!!!! |
by Laith
Cool one, is it a dream or something cause the end I never saw it coming but really good job!! |
by Roxiee An
Gr8 awesome and lovely . It has got a point . Keep it up |
by unblue skye
Wow! great job!!!! 5/5 |
Thats hot i like it a lot that really fing hot i didnt see it coming but i did at the same time wow excellent!!!! |
Great poem! i really liked it! |
by Sea2Summit
Turn yourself in before it's too late! |
That had to be one of the best poems i have read, i give that poem a 5/5 ...im gonna read a couple more ....u write really good |
I loved it! i feel it tell the scary truth about all of us that we are scared to face |
Very unique poem. I like it, a lot of excitement in it. |
Woah....thats good...teach me!!!!!! |
by Niinaa
I Love the style of writing it was edgy and kept the reader wanting to read from bgining to end and the twist in genius luv it |
That poem was WOW!! i mean the.....suspense in the whole poem!!!! 5/5 awesome!! i would love for you to give me pointers in writing!! thks!!! |
by Imogen
Really great poem, it grabbed me and kept my attention right up to the clever ending... well done 5/5 |