Really great poem, it grabbed me and kept my attention right up to the clever ending... well done 5/5

Oh my gosh! this poem is wonderfully suspensefull suspenseful and i love the ending twist.

And just my burning question (Its not actually true is it?)

I love your poem.. great job.. keep up the good work.. oh and great suspense

Gosh thats freeky

I love this twist at the end!!! you wright like me - i do twisty endings!! keep going i love it!

Wow. Very well expressed. 5! Excellent work. Its hard in life times, try to keep your head held high through the most difficult times. I'm here to listen if you need anything.

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Great stuff man.. one of my faves in a long time

Wow! nice ending!!

jeez... when can i make these kindda poems!!!

love the last part! really love the last part! yeah 5/5!!

"Stepping slowly from the shadows
He reveals his identity.
I gasp in shock when I see him,
For the killer…is me."

too good... very well written...

5/5 great write..had me sucked in from begining to end.

It is a beauty good job well done

That has been one of the coolest reads I have read in a long time. WOW!!

Amazing poem. Love it:)

I thought it was amazing. The twist at the end made me think of an O. Henry story. xD Your description and imagery are awesome, and it just leaves you wanting even more of the poem and or the writer's works. 5/5, though, I'd give this an 11 if possible.

Awesome!

Great end!
:)

Nice twist, good use of theme. I like the pace of the poem as well, reads easy no stumbling on words, apart from "Now I've nearly got him" for some reason this was the only line that stood out as not quite right. good job.

Great poem!!!

Wow, this was a great poem!!!

This is very good.
i love every part.
(: keep it up, i will have to read more of your work, you got me hooked!(:

Cool :)