The 'end' in 'Friends'

by kendra   Apr 23, 2005


I can't explain it,
Many times I've tried.
All that goes through my head,
Is that you lied.

You lied about our friendship,
You lied about forever,
You lied about the trust,
And now I can`t trust, never.

I'll never ever do it,
I'll never ever trust.
Because 'I promise',
Simply isn't enough.

Words are just words,
If there is no commitment.
Words are just lies,
If you don't even try.

We promised, 'Best friends for life',
So young and so naïve,
So foolish and dumb,
That crap, why did I believe?

My friendship you took,
My heart, you tore,
And now I simply don`t believe,
'Friends forever' anymore.

Those good times,
Now seem so long ago.
All those white lies,
The future, it seemed to foreshadow

I put my trust in you,
And so did you, in me.
But in the end only I,
Am holding on, so foolishly.

We didn't pass it,
The test of time.
So here's my goodbye,
This is my last rhyme.

* Wrote this some time ago... the ending is dumb, I know =P *

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  • 19 years ago

    by kendra

    What 'grammatical errors' ? theme? are you blind read the title and orginality. When I wrote this I wasn't thinking; "Hmm..I shouldn't write this because people like Eirisa will think it's not original" It was spur of the momemt.. I'd hate to be rude.

    And how can it be the 'greatest poem' if you critisize it RIGHT after complimenting it?

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Yeah this is the greatest poem hun, you should fix up your grammatical errors for starters. Besides that I hate to be rude but it lacks theme and originality too...

  • 19 years ago

    by Karry

    lmao hahah LOOOOOOOOOOOSER!! I LOVEEE this poem!! its so cute! and so meaningful..haha YOU inspire me to write me altho mine sucks but thats alrighty...lol buh bye xoxo-kare

  • 19 years ago

    by *seeing stars*

    This is REALLY good! You should write more!

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