This is REALLY good! You should write more! |
by Karry
lmao hahah LOOOOOOOOOOOSER!! I LOVEEE this poem!! its so cute! and so meaningful..haha YOU inspire me to write me altho mine sucks but thats alrighty...lol buh bye xoxo-kare |
by Eibutsina
Yeah this is the greatest poem hun, you should fix up your grammatical errors for starters. Besides that I hate to be rude but it lacks theme and originality too... |
by kendra
What 'grammatical errors' ? theme? are you blind read the title and orginality. When I wrote this I wasn't thinking; "Hmm..I shouldn't write this because people like Eirisa will think it's not original" It was spur of the momemt.. I'd hate to be rude. |