by Lecrissa Apr 23, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
The positive side |
by †JustAriâ€
again, the way life SHOULD be. Very good. :) Peace! //ari\\ |
by ~*Ley*~
it seemed rather choppy. but the message again, is very good |
by chloe
gud poem, great topic... rhyming is a little poor in some places... but not enough to spoil the poem so great job! |
by Robert
A great poem and well put I was very pleased. Soft but powerful great job Read Never-Ending Gift |
by AntiSocial16
yes, the rythm does need just a bit of help, but otherwise it is a terrific start! i liked this one! and i think im going to read part 2 now, cuz i guess that would be the sensible thing to do. stay safe, strong, and healthy! |