Thanks for the feedback! As you can tell I've never taken a poetry course. As it stands I simply justify its lack by labeling it "free-style" *smirks*.

"Bless the sun I cannot bear, from within the shadows I do not dare thine affection, but allow me in good faith to offer my name, to which thee might brand my blight and your earthly blemish.

By name he who begs of you…his name is Genesis. "

You are so intelligent and inspirational to me, each piece gives new life and justice to you as person... You're amazing. I'm just at loss of words so I'll stop rambling =)

Love Always
Heather M Craig
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Thank you Heather, you're words bring a fool's smile to my face =)

Many of us make blunders in our youth....and in the greater fantastical sense, immortality seems like a good idea at first.
In my writing "they" always realize that in their haste, that they will live forever alone.
And that's to say of those they had to leave behind.

And I'm not going anywhere ;)