Crimson Red

by Jen   Apr 23, 2005


Her favorite color is crimson red
The color of her self harm bled
all the fear she cannot shed
and her wishes of herself dead
alone in the world
is this little girl
She steps into her grave
her body and soul they deprave
all the lost ones
come together
in the region of nether
her favorite color is crimson red
of which she cannot see again
It starts to rain
and she curses god's name
is my life just a freaking game?!
as she cuts and sees her crimson blood has now turned a cold blue color
but as it hits the ground it turns the crimson red
it was then she realized that she was living her dream
and she was looking for her soul to redeem
the crimson red is now a puddle of mud
and her useless body hits it with a soft thud
Her favorite color was crimson red
but forever now she is dead

*nether means the underworld*
pleaz comment it may take a couple times of readin over to understand it tho

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Mmmm definitely my favourite of your poems, very surreal and well crafted, lots of imagery, couldnt ask for more

  • 19 years ago

    by Lenny

    Nice idea i likes it......

  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    thats a sweet poem. thanks for commenting on my poem. but i really really gotta know what book you saw that poem in. cus im totally gonna flip at them for stealing it from me. please send me an email and let me know. thanks!

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    This is an amazing poem...very original idea...keep writing, you're extremely talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jen

    to give u a clue of what this is about is its about a grl who died but didnt realize tht she was livin her death and misery for eternity !!! ahah im commentin on myself thts lame .......