to give u a clue of what this is about is its about a grl who died but didnt realize tht she was livin her death and misery for eternity !!! ahah im commentin on myself thts lame .......

This is an amazing poem...very original idea...keep writing, you're extremely talented.

thats a sweet poem. thanks for commenting on my poem. but i really really gotta know what book you saw that poem in. cus im totally gonna flip at them for stealing it from me. please send me an email and let me know. thanks!

Nice idea i likes it......

Mmmm definitely my favourite of your poems, very surreal and well crafted, lots of imagery, couldnt ask for more