Great poem. Theres only one flaw with it. Love is not selfish it is selfless. infatuation leaves room for selfishness in all still a good poem. |
There's no need to rip you. Its not that serious. I've always believed that to be true. The only reason you may feel I was tryin to get you is if what I said made sense. |
by LittleMsPink
I can feel the emotions running around this poem, have to say, great job |
by julie perez
Thanks again. :) |