I truely love this poem, and I hope that all you ladies out there enjoy it. I hope it does it for you. If you really like it please vote and leave comments.

Thanx, Matthew

lol good poem, very hot! ;)
had a definate affect on me :p
Keep up the good work, you should write more :)
xxxxxxx

Thanks for the comment. That's the first one I've ever written so its much appreciated that you liked it and left a comment. Neways this was a great poem...made me want my bf to haul his ass over here. lol. >3jess

oh my god!!! that was really good! damn i wish i was that chick!!!!!! oh my god!! keep writin and PLEASE submit. DAMN!!!! good job, matthew

oh yeah please comment on my poems i would surely appreciate them.

thanks

omg, i loved it, it actaully got me going and at the end where it said to breath because i got so into the poem i did, keep up with the good work, please comment on one of mine, but you don't have to.
love hannah

write more omg that was great

Wow. There's not much more to say than that. It was excellent. Keep it up! :-)

Hay matthew fuking awsome poem. very very hott and tingely. keep it up. and thank for the comment i am going to add you to my favorite. well peace out man. i would give it a 10 but i couldnt so i gave it a 5/5.

xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox

Wow, that was hot. extremely well written
lol
well thnx for your comments.
You were right i love your work!

jemma

makes me hot and shiver just thinking about it your awsome keep wrighting like this

hey this is REALLY good. im gonna put you on my favorites list and i hope to hear LOTS more from you good job.
check out more of mine if you want i have ALOT lol. love always, me lol savannah

whey to go, man. whey to go.

Gr8 poem! Made my 2 friends VERY HORNY!!!

yo freaky ass! that poem was crazy! two thumbs up for you. you know how to bring back memories!!!!!!!!!(marisa)

Ay folk! That shit sounds like sumthin I would write!!!!!!!!! You sure you haven't been folloing me????????????? (Street Lyric)

wow!! i really really like that lol no joke. it kinda put me in the mood lol. very very well writtin. i look foward to reading more of your poems. now on to part 2. good job!
xoxo samara

Thanks honey for commenting on my poem Our First Date. This poem was HOT HOT HOT! OMG HOT!! Total 5/5!!!! Keep it up! Just awesome!

love it!! great job, cant wait to read the 2nd installment!!

Wow now that was a hot poem! You did an amazing job with just the right amount of detail. You could almost feel it just by reading it! Loved it! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

another great poem..5/5 keep it up