Definitely not the usual...But I don't expect a usual from you. :) Versatility is a great trait to have as a writer...

Good luck (with whatever) & I wish you the best...

Unusual. I liked it. :-)
~keep it up~
5/5

-no more

different...... yeah different
but still good i mean i found it hard to follow but the bits i understood i thought it was very creative and has great potenial and seeing its a song well guess it would better sung huh?
>>5/5<<
bec

oh geese not a song SORRRRRY i feel like an idiot soz i think i saw the poem under it and it said not a song and this said story and since im tired my mind did some swtcheroo thing SORRY

NICE! i really do like it. It is a nice story. Is it true or just something you wrote?

Well that was different but it had a good meaning. The things we don't realize sometimes. Once again unique! Good job! Take Care and keep posting poems! Brooke

very interesting
I really like poems like this because its also a story.. it was very nicely put together as well.. I hope you make a part 2 lol
:) 5/5

the best loves are the ones we don't understand!

Wow!!!! its sush a great poem!!!!!!!!!! i like it!! 5/5..

Interesting story...i like it :)