Good work with this poem. I think it could use a bit more emotion bt other then that I thought you did a great job. It had a good rhyme scheme and flow.

Awww that was so cute....and good! I loved it! Well can't wait to read another one! Keep writing...

Awsomeeee!!

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!