Realization
by taylortws Apr 24, 2005
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I sit up at night thinking about my life. its stuck in a terrible place. death seems so close why wont it happen to me. i been sitting waiting for it to hit since i was young. my life my face my mind its all a waste. i shouldn't have ever entered your mind should have never crossed that line making it love. I'm strung out with no where to go I'm falling apart. time seems so slow i cant wait till i die. |
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19 years ago
:( nice to hear from ya again, you okay? I do hope some of your writing it just off the top of your head and not true.. get the feeling it is. Very emotional piece, strongly worded. rock on.
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19 years ago
by Michelle
Taytay.
..heh. It made me cry too.
I hate it so much when you're sad. It scares the helll outta me. I wish you were happier. I dunnu what I'd do if you weren't around. =/ Cheer up hun, and if I can do anything tell me okay?
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19 years ago
by Jacklyn
just just to tell you keep your chin up, theres so many people that care for u, including me! hang in there
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19 years ago
by Jacklyn
hey, sorry i haven't been on to talk in a while, but i was gone on a trip and just got back, dead tired though gota get some sleep. great job on the poem! 5.
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19 years ago
by Andriana
i just started to cry after reading half of it...
taylor, i love you so much. i dont think you notice how much i do. i wouldnt be able to live without you in this world. i hate to see you like this. id do anything if i could to make you happy than trying to help myself. i care so much about you. i dont think others understand that. im always thinking about you, and ill never stop. you know i love you, taylor.
<3 andriana...
