Oh my gosh, That is soo.... there are no words that can express how good that is. Kepp writin babe.

Chance.

Thanx, Chance! :) I really love your poem too!

-Frederick Chick

i like your poem, but plz keep ur opinion about my poems to yourself! :) Thanks!!

Thank you for the compliment, but I do believe that the comment button is there for a reason, and I was simply giving my opinion. I am sorry if I offended you in any way, your poem just was not the kind of thing I was looking for. As I said though, very good job on the rhyming. Oh, and I found this on your site on here, so I just guessed that you would like some helpful criticism "Hey, Read, vote and comment on my stuff please :D"

Thanx fredrick,