wow, very powerfully written. Awesome job. Def. 5 I love it. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment.

~no more

thats a real good poem 5/5 but I didn't like the guys suck part that hurt ok well if you would like you can checkl out one of mine "miles" i have a few

,Britton Bass

Oh darling, if you ever wanna talk about anything im here to listen! im just an email away
emz_hoopa32@hotmail.com......luv em

Omg.. ur poem was realllyyy good. omg u made me cry.. im sry if u ever went through this before.. if all this true im sry n i wish u luck in ur life.. ur a very good writer n u get all ur feelings out even tho there really strong feelings.. when u write i can picture it n im sry if u had 2 go through that.. if u ever wanna tlk email me at lilcutiepie1474@aim.com
xoxo -jennifer